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July 2nd, 2009 5:12 pmif I just added a bunch of line breaks to this it would be a poem
My name is Jim Hodgson and I live in Atlanta, GA. This is the story in progress about my year in high gear and my training progress as I attempt an Ironman race on August 30th, 2009. As you can see at right, I used to be extremely fat at 320lbs. This year I am trying to conquer that fatness once and for all.
This site contains personal photos, random thoughts about life and notes about my athletic goals and training which I describe candidly and with no concessions for appropriate language.
I also have a work site that describes what I'm up to professionally and my thoughts on new media and our new marketing landscape.
So, to business. My goal for 2009 is to live one year in high gear. Eating the right way, laying off the beers and most importantly, completing an Ironman triathlon in August. Follow my progress here.
if I just added a bunch of line breaks to this it would be a poem